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I love the way you tie her joint and muscle pain to her emotional anguish. I totally got it. Also the part where the bishop absolves her but she knows she can't forget what she did. Love it!

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This is the best chapter yet! The atmosphere, the sense of danger… so good.

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“ Catholicism was firmly planted in the very best and the very worst of humanity, Séverine knew.” So damn good, the whole piece. As always!!!

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